Come, watch the clouds with me,
tell me how they figure in the sky.
We'll disagree, deeply, together.
Come, dance in the rain with me,
We'll be voiceless and scream together,
and be out of words.
Come, inhale me...
We'll glow and fade deeply, together.
Draw me in like a firefly to the light,
to the lonely lantern,
in the lonely night.
HOLY SHIT! Beautiful... Fucking beautiful. So wonderful I cant help but curse :P The only way i can give it justice :P
ReplyDeleteBest fucking comment ever xD
ReplyDeletehahahhahahahhaha :D
ReplyDeleteI remember I commented on someone's poem something like, "oh fuck", and declaring it to be my best way of expressing awe :D So when someone says "fucking beautiful" about something I wrote I can only smile! =D
ReplyDeleteyeah i guesso Bex, :D
ReplyDeleteoooooh i love this poem ok then oh fuck (it was on aleves poem :) ) and to stop there (ive wrote this there as well!) so if one of your students comes up with an amazing job you shout oh fuck??? :D
ReplyDeletethe poem... as i said its superb i love all the lines cant pick out any!! i could say tears in my eyes but then i havent realy cried for some years....
Woow, what an amazing compliment amin :o
ReplyDeleteIf I have managed to bring out even the smallest of feelings I am more than happy... it is so full of my own feelings, this poem, full to the brim... it brings a sad smile to my face seeing some of that shines through to you.
Hahhaha no I don't do that! ;D
You just cracked me up totally! :D
the feeling you brought out of me wasnt small, like i said it made me wanna cry....
ReplyDeletei forgot to pick out thr amazing lines you write:
"Come, watch the clouds with me"
thats why i said (in my own blog) i feel that you feel like me..
"We'll disagree, deeply, together"
an amazing way to describe two people in love while hanging together on daily things...
"dance in the rain with me"
POTF :D
"We'll be voiceless and scream together,
and be out of words"
my god
"to the lonely lantern,
in the lonely night"
more than my god
Awwwww thank you <3
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