Tuesday, July 1

Fall In Grace

>>>>>we fall in grace<<<<<
>>>and watch the stars<<<<
>>>>>who are you?<<<<<<
>>>>>>>to hold?<<<<<<<<
>>>>>>>to touch?<<<<<<<
>>>>>>to embrace?<<<<<<
>>>>>>>either way<<<<<<
>>>we fall in grace<<<
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6 comments:

  1. RyanJuly 1, 2008 at 6:18 AM

    Such a beautiful, hopeful poem. I also loved how you centered the words, made it look nice and fancy :D

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  2. Amin hosseini nasabJuly 1, 2008 at 9:25 AM

    it made me in pressure with the arrows and stuf, but i love the first 2 lines.

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  3. Amin hosseini nasabJuly 1, 2008 at 9:27 AM

    i donno if youve noticed but i've commented on all your poems beks

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  4. Poet In The JarJuly 1, 2008 at 1:32 PM

    Thanks guys! It was one of those way past midnight poems. I like it a lot myself if I may say so.

    And amin, yes I have noticed, I'm halfway through replying to them :P

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  5. Amin hosseini nasabJuly 1, 2008 at 9:53 PM

    hah no you havent well hadnt i've comented about 5 days or so

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  6. Poet In The JarJuly 2, 2008 at 5:19 PM

    well when I wrote I was halfway through replying to them I really was. I saw many of your comments that exact day :) If you look now there should be replies to all of them! <3

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