Why am I so obsessed with you?
Your darkness isn't good for me
Drowning for you
Drowning in you
This sea is towering high above me
This castle too dark for me to climb
I watch from the bottom
of the bottomless well
You circle above me
You always were my vulture
I always died for you
You're waiting for me to fall
so that you can feast
I've been waiting for my fall
so that I can rest
Take every last bit and piece of me
That I hadn't already devoted you
Drive the cross through my heart,
like you already crossed my mind
Like you crossed my soul
Why am I so obsessed with you?
I'm a prisoner without a goal
Yet I'd rather die here in chains for you
Than trying to set myself free
You are the only free I'll know
"Why am I so obsessed with you?
ReplyDeleteYour darkness isn't good for me
Drowning for you
Drowning in you"
:O I love this one! so much! definitly one of my favorites! And starting it off like that is pure brilliance :D it's my favorite part of the whole poem and it's right at the beginning, it just gets you hooked the minute you begin to read :)
Thanks a lot Chelsea! =)
ReplyDeleteChelsea said exactly what i wanted to say!! That beginning... its pure gold.
ReplyDeleteBut even the ending did just the work for me!!
"Yet I'd rather die here in chains for you
Than trying to set myself free"
:O
*claps*
Thank you so much. Yes in deed, the ending lines pretty much sums up what the whole piece was about. :P
ReplyDeleteI think that the very last line is just great.
ReplyDeleteAww :)
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