I don't know who you are anymore,
and you don't really know me
Both of us grew anonymous,
head over heels with free
I thought I was somehow special
You fed my makebelieve
Again, there it is,
and I hide away and leave
Trying to safekeep
just a little part of me
Again, there it is,
you take your every chance
Kill me again, with something
mimicing romance
I gone lost in what to do or how,
and the light in the lighthouse faded
Both of us steered blindly,
I touched you, you were jaded
Don't fool me again that I'm special
You made dead my makebelieve
Again, there it is,
and I hide away and leave
Trying to safekeep
just a little part of me
Again, there it is,
you take your every chance
Kill me again, with something
mimicing romance
I'm a wreck for you to fire your cannons through
About all that I ever was to you
Forget about the rest
There isn't anything left
Again, there it is,
ReplyDeleteand I hide away and leave
Trying to safekeep
just a little part of me
Again, there it is,
you take your every chance
Kill me again, with something
mimicing romance
I LOVE THE CHORUS!!
And the rest is amazinga s well, such spite, such beauty in the words.. its a wonderful piece of lyrics.
Agreed with Ryan! those lines are actually amazing!!! I loved them a lot!
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
Hell I'd like to hear this as a song with music and all...
ReplyDeleteTruly moving piece. I only recently started writing songs (and I really suck in it), however I've started to see lyrics in a whole different light. This one works as a poem brilliantly but I can easily imagine it's a wonderful song as well :)
You're extremely talented, I gotta say :)
I had a block for a long time, as you have maybe noticed so I didn't visit my blog for the whole time. That was obviously a mistake, because there's so many great new pieces here that I have missed!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with everyone here about this one! The chorus is simply a masterpiece as well as the other parts, and I'd too like to hear this as a song someday!
Awww Cab nice to see you back :) Nice to know your block has not affected your ability to read ;D
ReplyDelete@ FR: I'm working on it ;)
@ DP, Ryan: Thanks so much, it started out with those lines, the rest of the song was built around it. :)