Tuesday, July 15

Embrace Away

I'm empty.
Nothing to it.
I gave it all away.
Too fast,
too strong,
to get away.
So I stay.
Where I'm empty.
It's all that I know.
Too uncertain,
to ever let go.
I'm empty.
Nothing to it.
You embraced it,
all away.
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6 comments:

  1. RyanJuly 15, 2008 at 3:36 AM

    Everything went so well together, your powerful style, the compact lines, the wonderful words, BRAVO!

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  2. Poet In The JarJuly 15, 2008 at 6:51 PM

    Hahaha, I didn't know I had a "powerful style". :D This one's dead personal to me. Nowhere near hopeful. I hope that'll change by the day...

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  3. RyanJuly 16, 2008 at 7:33 PM

    Your style has always packed a good punch, its what makes me love it so much :P

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  4. Poet In The JarJuly 17, 2008 at 12:55 AM

    "packed a good punch" hahaha! please stop, you are killing me :D

    thank youu <3 *blushes a bit*

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  5. Amin hosseini nasabJuly 19, 2008 at 8:59 AM

    hah yap this is was your usual style before, its come back!! i like the poem Specially these lines:

    "to get away.
    So I stay" a paradox...

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  6. Poet In The JarJuly 19, 2008 at 3:56 PM

    Everyone seems to know how my style looks like and changes, all I know is that I write :D

    Thank you all not only for commenting but also for paying this kind of attention to my writing. You keep me going. <3

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