Friday, June 13

Hello, Butterflies

I haven't felt them for quite a while.
But you brought them out,
and made them flicker.
You made them fly.

I haven't felt it for quite some time.
But you brought it to my heart,
and brought it to my eyes.
I can't stop smiling,
and I can't explain why.

I've been walking in eternal night.
Only known wrongs, never rights.
But you brought me light.
Hello, butterflies...
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8 comments:

  1. RyanJune 14, 2008 at 2:10 PM

    This poem made me smile Becca, very beautiful and very well made. Great job Becca.

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  2. Poet In The JarJune 15, 2008 at 12:26 AM

    Thanks Raves, I smiled while writing it as well... <3 Unusually happy for being me :D

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  3. RyanJune 15, 2008 at 12:31 AM

    thats probly what made it such a special poem, a comfortable change in pace :P

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  4. Poet In The JarJune 15, 2008 at 11:43 AM

    Let's hope that change keeps at it :)

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  5. AnonymousJune 25, 2008 at 3:36 AM

    Awwww! I love it honey. =)

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  6. Poet In The JarJune 25, 2008 at 8:46 PM

    Still love it myself. Nice to see something you written that aint completely manodepressive. ^^

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  7. Amin hosseini nasabJune 27, 2008 at 8:37 AM

    heh it made me smile too even after your last poem (dust) hello butterflies, i dont think a better title exists oh i cant beleive i wasnt around to read all this.

    i like ALL lines beki you yourself are top tallent.

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  8. Poet In The JarJuly 1, 2008 at 1:50 PM

    :o

    Thank you so much Amin!

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