Tuesday, October 21

Under Your Leaf

Walk me by.
I'm not a storm cloud, raging.
I'm not the thunder bolts.
Not even the rain.
I'm nothing interesting,
I'm nothing but plain.

Walk me by.
I'm not a rainbow, doubled.
I'm not the golden treasure.
Not even a color, or a shade.
I'm nothing of value,
I'm a ghost in pain.

Walk me by.
I'm not a friend, fading.
I'm only under your leaf.
You held me dry all awhile,
but ghosts without value
all fade with time.

Walk me by.

I still didn't forgive you.
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8 comments:

  1. RyanOctober 21, 2008 at 8:41 PM

    awwwww this is wonderful, this is exceptional. I LOVE the metaphors, everything flows so well.. i especially loved the last verse.. it conveyed true emotions. Great work.

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  2. Poet In The JarOctober 22, 2008 at 1:12 AM

    Thanks raves :)

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  3. eb91893October 22, 2008 at 6:03 AM

    this possibly could be my favorite you've ever written .
    :)
    good work.

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  4. AlevOctober 22, 2008 at 2:17 PM

    Wooow, this one is like.. wooow.. *marks as a favorite of the favorites* What is there more to say? xD No, really, it's just incredible work hon, great job.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 22, 2008 at 4:43 PM

    Beautiful, powerful language! Really impressive use of style and font sizes! Truly impressed!

    My blog, which you asked for is
    http://sheriffofnottingham.blogg.se

    Big english hug from Nott'm!!!

    Faithfully yours

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  6. Poet In The JarOctober 22, 2008 at 9:15 PM

    Wow thanks fellas *shy*

    Aww nissee! thanks for the adress, i kept forgetting ;) I will visit more regularly now! ;)

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  7. ChelsOctober 25, 2008 at 7:33 PM

    Thats amazing :D i love it! it flows so well :D great emotion :)

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  8. Poet In The JarOctober 27, 2008 at 6:47 PM

    awwww thanks sis <333

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