I'm sitting here, an empty shell, So much more I wanted to be. I watch it slip through my fingers. All that it meant to be free. I should feel relieved, and lifted from pain, but I'm only shutting down, imprisoned again.
"I'm sitting here, an empty shell, So much more I wanted to be. I watch it slip through my fingers. All that it meant to be free. I should feel relieved, and lifted from pain, but I'm only shutting down, imprisoned again."
There you go... I quoted my favourite lines :P
No really, you've said so much in these few lines.. Becc, I hope you know this, but you've got a gift!! Promise me you wont ever lose it :)
ITS YOUR POETRY THAT GETS ME THROUGH THE DAY, YOU KNOW?
so much in so few lines, wonderful work Bex, you really are The most talented writer i know (well, some writers haven't given anything for me to judge them by but you surpass all those i know personally and have read). Keep up the incredible work.
I can not thank you enough for your praise, none of you :o THANK YOU ALL for keeping coming here and commenting my pieces! It really makes all worth it ;)
Yikes, you and Ayan both have like million new pieces I haven't read :O
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They're all masterpieces, and you should be proud to have skills like that. Not everyone has :)
But especially I'd like to praise Surgery Table. It just blew my mind all the way from the first stanza!
This one's Bec at her best!
Keep them coming, and happy new year! :)
"I'm sitting here, an empty shell,
ReplyDeleteSo much more I wanted to be.
I watch it slip through my fingers.
All that it meant to be free.
I should feel relieved, and lifted from pain,
but I'm only shutting down,
imprisoned again."
There you go... I quoted my favourite lines :P
No really, you've said so much in these few lines.. Becc, I hope you know this, but you've got a gift!! Promise me you wont ever lose it :)
ITS YOUR POETRY THAT GETS ME THROUGH THE DAY, YOU KNOW?
o.O just one word: wow. Do I have to say more to praise you? :D
ReplyDeleteI love this one !! Sounds like sth I would write. :P *ego* xD
ReplyDeleteSeriously, it's brilliant. <33 :)
Wow I love this :) It's short, but says so much. I agree with Devil's Pride.. you really do have a gift :)
ReplyDeleteso much in so few lines, wonderful work Bex, you really are The most talented writer i know (well, some writers haven't given anything for me to judge them by but you surpass all those i know personally and have read). Keep up the incredible work.
ReplyDeleteI can not thank you enough for your praise, none of you :o THANK YOU ALL for keeping coming here and commenting my pieces! It really makes all worth it ;)
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