Poet In The Jar Diaries: Impersonation

Friday, January 2

Impersonation

Love.
This isn't it.
Another shallow impersonation,
Another piece, that doesn't fit.

Love.
Is this all?
It's only to make me falter,
It's only to make me fall.

Love.
This isn't right.
Another meaningless echo,
Feathers, in a pillow fight.

4 comments:

RyanJanuary 2, 2009 at 4:10 PM
strong feelings, gotta love it, great portrayal.
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NeeylaJanuary 2, 2009 at 4:13 PM
Extremely beautiful! <3

This:
Love.
This isn't right.
Another meaningless echo,
Feathers, in a pillow fight.

is just... powerful is the best word I can find.
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AlevJanuary 2, 2009 at 5:14 PM
:o I LOVE this one! <33
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Poet In The JarJanuary 2, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Thank you! I had to get it out of me... :)
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My world is like a glass jar that isolates me from the rest of the world, and the glass is the cover that life has placed on my eyes. Inside it I am the poet who hasn't decided whether the lid should be opened or closed - if reality should be welcomed inside, or if madness should be let out.

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