They all say she's a fighter
That she kicked and punched to survive
All awhile she was drowning herself
All in a hopeless troublesome lie
She never was a fighter
They all say she's smiling
Even her melancholy smile
All awhile she had muted herself
All to quiet her screaming inside
She never really smiled
They all say she's vivid alive
That she kicked back up from everything
All awhile she let go of herself
All awhile she was falling within
She never was alive
They all say she'll make it
Time will heal self-inflicted scars
All awhile she never knew of time
Only what pieces of moments are
She never really made it
o.O all I can say.. that hit hard! brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks rocco <3
ReplyDeletewow you never seem to stop amazing me beki.
ReplyDeletethe last lines in each stanza made all the poem. its another master piece ;)
i speccialy love the line "All awhile she never knew of time"
i dont know why..
I love that line too... it's an old idea of subjectiveness in time that I have never been able to let go :) I'm so glad you like my stuff that much... it feels to know that you're amazing someone :D :D
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