Something must be wrong with me,
I'm the anxious and troubled kind.
Will someone diagnose me?
Medicate my puzzled mind?
Something isn't right with me,
I'm dependent on my pills.
I've been diagnosed already,
I know that I am ill.
None of that is the burning issue,
none of that is the matter at hand.
I don't really need your therapy,
Bottled up with a fancy brand.
Pass me out with all your drugs,
Write another recipe.
Whatever takes the least of your time,
Whatever leaves the rest to me.
Something here is undefined,
I'm still the anxious and troubled kind.
Will someone sedate me?
And soothe my puzzled mind?
Something here is beyond me,
I'm still dependent on my pills.
I've been diagnosed already,
Why do I suffer still?
None of that is the burning issue,
none of that is the matter at hand.
I don't really need your therapy,
Bottled up with a fancy brand.
Pass me out with all your drugs,
Write another recipe.
Whatever takes the least of your time,
Whatever leaves the rest to me.
I don't really need your therapy
I've been diagnosed already
Might as well leave the rest to me
no words really to define this piece.. im spell bound.. :|
ReplyDeleteCould this BE any more ridiculously amazing?
"None of that is the burning issue,
none of that is the matter at hand.
I don't really need your therapy,
Bottled up with a fancy brand."
My o my!!! :o this is definitely one of the best poems i have ever read in all my life.. and im not really surprised it came from you...
Thank you!
:)
*cant find jaws*
oh wow. I think that writing rhymes is really really really difficult! I can´t do it anyway, it starts to sound so.. well not nice anyway. so this is something I could never do.. I mean, I could never write like you anyway but writing rhymes.. nonono.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about rhymes, I just catch words. I don't really intend to write any special way, they just turn out that way when I guide them to paper. ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you so, so much... I can't really find any words enough to thank that comment, DP. Really can't. You got my heart very much warmed up nonetheless :)
:o
ReplyDeleteI'm at a loss for words.
I really truely love this one. Definitly My favorite of yours so far! Great job! You have created a true masterpiece! :D
Awww Chels! <3
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