I'm glad I'm still not figured out,
that I'm a puzzle, still unsolved.
Or else I would be shallow in person,
A universe round me revolved.
Ponder me eternally if you wish,
I'm a maze with no way out.
I'd rather be mysterious in person,
than be marked in detail on paper,
having been all straightened out.
that I'm a puzzle, still unsolved.
Or else I would be shallow in person,
A universe round me revolved.
Ponder me eternally if you wish,
I'm a maze with no way out.
I'd rather be mysterious in person,
than be marked in detail on paper,
having been all straightened out.
I really dont know which lines to quote! the whole piece has got me struck with wonder!! how can u write down the world in so few lines?? :o
ReplyDeleteI could really do good with even half of the talent you've got!!
i dont only look up to your works... I worship you to be honest! :D
you are really one hell of a writer!! Its like evryone can relate to with this poem,, i see a lot of myself in it.. i love it
*worships*
:)
Your comments always make me smile like a stupid fool and this is no exception :D And no bullshit about talent. Art is not a subject in which to compete or compare, and even if it were, you should know that I look up to you as well. In fact I really admire your writing. I couldn't ever write like you! But isn't that half of the whole thing? That we all dedicate ourselves to writing but write in different ways? :) I believe that is the essence of it all, interpretation and when it falls. :)
ReplyDeleteAwww!! ^^
ReplyDeleteWise, old Becc :P xD
Yeah, my 21 years has taught me alot xD
ReplyDeleteoooh!! m still to discover myself at 17 xD :P
ReplyDeletelol
Hahaha! :D
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