You've lasted forever.
I've staggered between darkness and light.
With every day that grew brighter,
I fell down, wanting to give in.
I miss you already.
You've kept me in shadows,
in vaguely defined sin.
You seem to never end.
I've dragged myself between mileposts,
none of them seeming to matter.
You've held all that was crucial.
All that I've mourned.
I miss you already.
You encapsuled me.
I belonged here,
In your melancholy.
And now that sadness is ending.
I want to stay in my pretending.
One hell of a brilliant ending! ^^
ReplyDeleteIt seems unbelievable that you keep coming with these amazing poems with different kind of subjects all the time... Honestly, have you ever had a block? :P
I've had serious blocks, although I never really consider them as blocks. It scares your writing mind away to convince yourself you can't write ;) Mostly though these are just my diary posts, only in this form, if I don't get it out of me I'll explode... I just have to deal with my feelings somehow, this is the only way I know of to do it :p
ReplyDeleteWith longer pieces I am on more or less constant block though, with highpoints here and there... ;)
Thanks so much FR! <3 Haha you think the subjects change a lot? And I keep thinking I just write the same thing, over and over :D :D Really thanks, I love your comment :)
hey! sorry ive been gone for so long, i really hadnt come on the internet! life really sucks...
ReplyDeletegreat new look btw!
now about the poem.... its so.... complex!
"i wanna stay in my pretending"
dont we all ==)
Amin :o <333 Great to have you back! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, yeah the site needed a change. And everyone pretends. Life works that way! =)