Yellow coat, that's Rainy Jack,
pulling a smoke from his cigarette pack,flipping open his lighter in the rain,
anything, to drown the pain.
Walks there, constantly.
Heavy boots, that's Rainy Jack,
clicking on the pavement track,
looking at the sky instead of his trail,
anything, to drown betrayal.
Walks there, dejectedly.
Slanting hat, that's Rainy Jack,
torn by the wind's every attack,
reluctant last glance over his shoulder,
anything, to drown the cold.
Walks there, everly.
One last staggering step for Rainy Jack,
One last siege and vicious attack,
and suddenly no steps stagger no more,
no steps faltering to fall.
Walks there, constantly,
in the rain,
until it all repeats again.
Bex :o New layout? Love it :D
ReplyDeleteAnd the poem? Incredible indeed! Made me smile, again? :S wtf is wrong with me lately? I tend to smile like an idiot while reading poems? But this one is awesome :D Rainy jack? where did the idea come from ?
It came from when I talked to Ryan about defining myself as the rain... and about when I told you what I see when I look inside of myself, that rainy street, he's just someone who was walking there, meaning, in fact he's actually me. My alter ego :) I love him already. I'm gonna try and draw him! ;) Hahahah maybe you're just happy with life? =)
ReplyDeletei LOOOVE the layout.. but i like the poem even better.. it defines you Bekki.. its beautiful and dark and rainy.. gotta love it
ReplyDeleteThanks ryan... :) I didn't feel ok with the last layout I switched to ;) This one was better :)
ReplyDeletehmmmm you know what, this reminds me of primary school poetry, dont get me wrong i dont mean its that, aaah you know what i mean, right?
ReplyDeletemaybe its the "rainy jack" and some of the rhyming. dont know
its a great piece anw
btw that my everything, thing, do you mind explaining? no first of all tell me what it is?
It's a great primary school poem? xD xD Hahaha :D Thanks I guess ;)
ReplyDeleteWhat is it you want me to explain? Is that from some other poem? *confused* :D
no its on the left side of your blog, theres this pic/movie of a girl and above youve wrote my everything? its a link.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah that, that is the girl from Diamonds for Tears video :) I linked to POTF's site with it. I just love that still where she's standing in the rain. She's so beautiful :) And POTF are my everything so :) ;)
ReplyDeleteoh! yeah youre right XD
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