Poet In The Jar Diaries: Your Hell

Monday, December 1

Your Hell

After you were here
After you filled hour after hour
And took the edge of
everything scary
After you left
After you're gone
I'm empty
I'm apathy
I'm no longer me
After you took your song away
After the sound died out
There are echoes here
There are shadows here
You'll never know you were it
And I'll never tell
I'm empty
I'm apathy
Just a feeling away from your hell

5 comments:

AyanDecember 3, 2008 at 9:28 PM
The last line just crowns the whole thing!! ^^ the piece is amazing!! Way to go!! :)
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Poet In The JarDecember 3, 2008 at 11:32 PM
Thank you DP ! =D Always glad to read your comments :)
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RyanDecember 4, 2008 at 1:48 AM
that was a wonderful poem Bex.. filled with real emotions, screaming out.. its Really good :P
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AyanDecember 4, 2008 at 4:48 AM
if my comments make you happy, you've got no idea then how much happy i get by reading your comments on my works !!! :P
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Poet In The JarDecember 9, 2008 at 1:02 AM
I say its a mutual thing! :D
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My world is like a glass jar that isolates me from the rest of the world, and the glass is the cover that life has placed on my eyes. Inside it I am the poet who hasn't decided whether the lid should be opened or closed - if reality should be welcomed inside, or if madness should be let out.

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