Did you ever ask me?
No, you never asked me
cause I was there before you knew you
had to ask me
Did you ever let me?
Yeah, you always let me
cause I was there before you knew you
had to let me
I don't mind watching you in my mind
As long as you follow
These conditions
As long as you mean to
As long as you give me those eyes
every once in a while
I don't mind
I don't mind
As long as you mean to
As long as you thank me for being there
from time to time
I don't mind
Did you ever fall down?
No, you never fell down
cause I was always there to catch you
before you fell down
And did you ever break down?
No, you never broke down
cause I was there to console you
before you broke down
Every time around
I don't mind watching you in my mind
As long as you follow
These conditions
As long as you mean to
As long as you give me those eyes
every once in a while
I don't mind
I don't mind
As long as you mean to
As long as you thank me for being there
from time to time
I don't mind
Tells a vivid story with true images coming to mind, thoughts stirred and ideas brought to life. One of your best!!
ReplyDeleteReally? Wow, thanks! I wrote it singing in the shower! :D
ReplyDeletehaha thats so awesome!! The most beautiful things come to us when we'd never expect it, from melody to words and then to other wonderful wonders.
ReplyDeleteI agree, if I was to sit down thinking, "now I'm going to write a brilliant song", nothing would come out of it (except maybe a really crappy song). It's those moments when we're open and not narrow-minded that things like these happen :D
ReplyDeleteAwwwww. That's a sweet song. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks honey! :)
ReplyDeleteamazing poem once again, you seem to give everything to someone, very emotoinal, and yet that someone doesnt give the same but you dont mind do you? its just amazing. and to think you wrote that in the shower, huh its funny what some alone time does to us!
ReplyDeletehaha, yeah isn't it weird? XD
ReplyDeleteYou really got me there, that's exactly what it's about... it's like, I don't mind being there for other people, just as long as they thank me for it, you know? Well, I guess that's not entirely true :P