Sunday, July 20

Dream Train

I don't eat.
Might as well starve.
You waved food in my face
and never let me taste...
I don't drink.
Might as well die of thirst.
I know you'd wanna catch me
but you want me to fall first...
I don't sleep.
Might as well stay awake.
You were on the same dream train.
Fall asleep and I will fall again...
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6 comments:

  1. RyanJuly 21, 2008 at 3:56 PM

    So wonderfully relevant to the things going on in your life and placed in such a wonderfully beautiful package :D

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  2. Poet In The JarJuly 22, 2008 at 12:06 AM

    Thanx rayn, I can only agree. All I do is pour my heart out over the keyboard ;)

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  3. RyanJuly 22, 2008 at 3:13 AM

    hahahahahahaaha nearly the exact same here Bex :P

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  4. Amin hosseini nasabJuly 22, 2008 at 10:00 AM

    nearly the exact same everywhere ;)

    a feel of sadness from hate in the poem....

    i love the lines:

    "I know you'd wanna catch me
    but you want me to fall first"

    "Fall asleep and I will fall again"

    * you connect trains to sleeping. well kinda..... hah :)

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  5. AlevJuly 26, 2008 at 4:25 AM

    This is so beautiful! <3 I wuv it. :)

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  6. Poet In The JarAugust 6, 2008 at 9:16 PM

    Thank you guys <3

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