Hold on
I'm weaker than you
Why am I here?
You cut off the rope
I'm an outcast
At last
Who told you I wanted to be stranded
Who told you I wanted to sail
I can't see myself rowing back
I lost my course and my trail
Hold on
I'm weaker than you
Why are you here?
I cut off the rope
You're an outcast
At last
I led you on to leaving me here
I should never have pushed you that far
I know you didn't want to walk
You didn't want to wander with me
Hold on
You're weaker than me
Why are you here?
I cut off the rope
I'm an outcast
At last
I left you a note in a bottle
and swept it away in the sea
But the note I slipped you was empty
It only held value to me
Don't open the glass bottle
Unless you know what you'll see
Forever I'll be the outcast
Forever I'm lonely and free
Hold on
I'm weaker than you
Why am I here?
You cut off the rope
I'm an outcast
At last
You'll never see me
Will you?
I love the mix of saying 'im weaker than you' and 'you're weaker than me' :D
ReplyDeleteanother masterpiece!
"I'm an outcast
ReplyDeleteAt last"
Strong Lines!! :D
"Who told you I wanted to be stranded
Who told you I wanted to sail
I can't see myself rowing back
I lost my course and my trail"
I LOVE these lines!!! the whole idea is just beautiful!
and... saving the best for the last....
"I left you a note in a bottle
and swept it away in the sea
But the note I slipped you was empty
It only held value to me
Don't open the glass bottle
Unless you know what you'll see
Forever I'll be the outcast
Forever I'm lonely and free"
this is BEYOND my belief... the whole theme in the piece is just so fuckin awesome!
A delight to visit your blog every time! :)
pretty confusing. idea slipped from my hands, or should I say from my head. erm.
ReplyDelete"You'll never see me
Will you?"
the most powerful lines, brilliant. ^^
Thanks all of you :) Major blushing. It delights me that you like it so. I just blurted it out.
ReplyDeleteRocco, yeah I find it confusing too in fact. Not sure what it says. xD