Give me fireworks
and I won't enjoy them
Give me the stars
and I won't stay in their light
Give me everything
that shimmers in the sky
and I won't be as naive as to
swallow their shine
C'mon, give me fireworks
They'll do wonders to my soul
Just maybe they will work
just enough to make me whole
Give me your fireworks
I won't enjoy them
Give me your stars
I won't stay in their light
Always as fleeting
as a firefly
Always fleeting
Don't know why
A pretty cool poem you've got here =D Great job! ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you sweetie =) I wrote it on New Year's Eve. Felt a bit down... How was your New Years?
ReplyDeleteI had a great new years! Too bad you were feeling down...
ReplyDeleteThe poem is incredible, it tells that gifts and trinkits aren't what truly matter its feelings that truly Shine
Aww, sorry to hear that hon! How are you feeling now, I hope a lot better? :)
ReplyDeleteMine was dull and boring; it was spent indoors and studying for finals, urghh.
Really? Surely not when the clock struck twelve? Even I was outdoors then, watching the fireworks... you do that kind of stuff too? Hope your finals are gonna go smoothly by, I have all the faith in you in the world, sweetheart. =)
ReplyDeleteGlad yours was good, raves :P And I'm surprised about how you interpret this poem, it's not what I thought when I wrote it but nevertheless interesting :D
I'm a bit better now, yeah, guess the alcohol has a depressing effect on me. Gotta stop drinking xD